Creek walk haiku: 2 haiku

dragonfly stalks, skims
& hovers over water–
delicate hunter

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if light shaped music
the sun would chime reflections
dancing on water

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About Susan L Daniels

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12 Responses to Creek walk haiku: 2 haiku

  1. sandy says:

    That second haiku is delightful. I can imagine the sound.

  2. nelle says:

    I love dragonflies… light and sound as interchangeable and as one. Hmmmm.

  3. Nice! Really nice. Physics (specific gravity – skimming on water surface) Biology (food chain and suggestions of predation), light, color, sound, movement all combine to produce multilayered meanings and beautiful poetry!

  4. Mr. Walker says:

    “delicate hunter” is so good for dragonflies – I think they’re beautiful – and yet they creep me out a little bit.

    Richard

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