12 Responses to Creek walk haiku: 2 haiku

1. Rhonda says:

   May 30, 2012 at 5:56 pm

   Perfect
   • Susan L Daniels says:

     May 30, 2012 at 5:57 pm

     Thank you–if light make music, that water would have been singing, truly 🙂
     • Rhonda says:

       May 30, 2012 at 6:04 pm

       perfect picture. as always.
       • Susan L Daniels says:

         May 30, 2012 at 7:07 pm

         You are too kind, SFAM.
2. sandy says:

   May 30, 2012 at 8:23 pm

   That second haiku is delightful. I can imagine the sound.
   • Susan L Daniels says:

     May 30, 2012 at 8:27 pm

     Thank you so much, Sandy! Beautiful walk & time spent sitting by the creek with a notebook this afternoon!
3. nelle says:

   May 31, 2012 at 1:28 am

   I love dragonflies… light and sound as interchangeable and as one. Hmmmm.
   • Susan L Daniels says:

     May 31, 2012 at 1:32 am

     Thanks, Nelle. Guess I always have to bend properties, don’t I?
4. Noel Ihebuzor says:

   May 31, 2012 at 7:18 am

   Nice! Really nice. Physics (specific gravity – skimming on water surface) Biology (food chain and suggestions of predation), light, color, sound, movement all combine to produce multilayered meanings and beautiful poetry!
   • Susan L Daniels says:

     May 31, 2012 at 12:09 pm

     Thank you, Noel. From now on, that notebook goes with me.
5. Mr. Walker says:

   June 4, 2012 at 3:02 pm

   “delicate hunter” is so good for dragonflies – I think they’re beautiful – and yet they creep me out a little bit.

   Richard
   • Susan L Daniels says:

     June 4, 2012 at 4:10 pm

     Yes–beautifully deadly.

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