juarez (some then but mostly now)

my parents pose in black & white
in a styleline convertible
their saturday drive to juarez
for tequila
& cheap newports

the place is the same
just 60 years older. peeled paint
& american factories
blight what was spoiled already
in digital color

a man spits tobacco juice
dark as liver failure piss
near my shoes, says
i’m less afraid of gangs
than police or army,
they have better guns
but that same swagger. be careful
of the eyes you meet.

my mother’s carved mexican
a souvenir, a reminder of how
she learned broken spanish
spiced with tequila, but that
was her juarez,
not this crime scene now.
he balances on my palm
neckless,
his head tilted up
& mouth stretched
to hold toothpicks
in a bristled scream

the army guns are better
says the spitter
& their colors more muted
but they all wear the same stink–

metal & blood
lipsticked on the wall
tattooed on skin. a haloed saint
weeps between the shoulder blades
of a sniper.

there are as many churches
as bars here, but how
will we worship
in juarez? humility is easy
this close to dirt, but
not faith. prayer
this breath of hands
fanned against plaster roughness
or cracked concrete

keep lying down.
if you kneel you die.

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my armistice

i can give 2 minutes
at 11 o’clock–
the first minute silent
to remember 20 million dead

the second minute quiet
to respect the pain of the living
that mourned them

my sacrifice small
in comparison

one wreath
for so many graves

but i will add it

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Silence: The conversation continues

By Susan L. Daniels and Noel A. Ihebuzor

S:
it echoes–
this pause before words
weighted breath

N:
It speaks loud
the empty spaces
between words

S:
those moments
minds falter before
sharing truth

N:
truth haltered
for so long, now free
freeing tears!

S:
and floating
on that salt river
soft releasing

N:
hidden fears
uncertainties now
flowing away

tumbling down
tongue now unleashed to
wonder why

 

***Wow–it seems two poets can say a lot about silence!  This was fun!

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Arms and voices for peace: A duet

by Noel Ihebuzor and Susan Daniels

there are arms we lay down
& others we hold open

there are tongues we must still
and others we loose;
the barbed tongue that howls like a howitzer
we have to leash and rein in

there are arms we must raise
arms raised to embrace, to rejoice.
there are arms to down
arms clenched, crest fists in tsunami rage,
or balance hands
that shape silos tilted skyward, curved metal calculated
and conducted to maximum strikes,
singing death in mournful tunes

against such,
let us loose the tongue that coos
softer than the dove,
sweeter as beautiful rays splashed
on the wide bosom of a waking beach

i would plot the curve of a cheek, rested
on my shoulder, lay down
what holds us at arm’s length
and instead open–
a gesture with a bell’s resonance

that tongue whose voice melodiously flutters
under a blue sky,
let her reign,
let her caress and conquer
the hardness of our guns and melt our swords

these arms, these hands
could pull needles from softened metal
that was swords
and use these tongues to tell it–

let us close the gaping wounds
on the face of the earth
caused by the savage rage
of raw us clawing at things we never can ever own
let it begin, this stitching together
of something torn

 

***Noel (regular typeface) and I (italicized) decided to blend our efforts for the Dverse prompt today, which involves truce or armistice.  As always, this was so much fun to craft with Noel–a wonderful, inspiring co-creator and friend!

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what’s coming

Maybe our talk should be shaped of
small things, nothing as large
as hope, but perhaps small as love
that starts within a seed.

Before growth, there is potential–
color & scent folded
into code only roses know
& tell after blooming.

I don’t ask for what you can’t bring
but I would tell stories
of what our names mean.  I would sing
truth curled under my tongue.

Before growth, there is potential–
color & scent folded
into code only roses know
& tell after blooming.

I do not ask for or need forgiveness,
that has not happened yet, but waits inside
and if I share this story of us
it is because I have seen it unfold.

Before growth, there is potential–
color & scent folded
into code only roses know
& tell after blooming.

 

***Okay, we all know how much I love forms, right?  NOT!  For playing with words this week, we are doing ballads.  So…  What I did was use the ballad form for something that is not a ballad, because I am rebellious that way.

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tarot (let me tell your story backward)

i can tell this you
in pictures–
here,  flashed & thrown

in the movements of wands
the hope of cups
the sing & sting of swords
& the shine of coins

where the empress
embraces the fool
at the foot of the tower

our days numbered
& reversed

if I am the high priestess
crossing death

anything
is possible

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silence–haiku triptych

a haiku chain by Susan Daniels & Noel Ihebuzor

it echoes–
this pause before words
weighted breath

It speaks loud
the empty spaces
between words

those moments
minds falter before
sharing truth

***My friend Noel and I had a haiku conversation in the comments that I brought out into the main poem, because his response was just so lovely.  His haiku is italicized.  

 

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