By Susan L. Daniels and Noel A. Ihebuzor
S:
it echoes–
this pause before words
weighted breath
N:
It speaks loud
the empty spaces
between words
S:
those moments
minds falter before
sharing truth
N:
truth haltered
for so long, now free
freeing tears!
S:
and floating
on that salt river
soft releasing
N:
hidden fears
uncertainties now
flowing away
tumbling down
tongue now unleashed to
wonder why
***Wow–it seems two poets can say a lot about silence! This was fun!
sure was!
🙂
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Talking Silence with Susan Daniels
So well done both of you
Thanks, Boomie!
I like, very much! An Awesome read 🙂
Thanks–my friend here is a haiku genius!
🙂 Both of your works are amazing!
Aw, thanks!
🙂
A wonderful duet … loved it !!!
Thank you!
nicely done, as always you two. Alot can be said about silence..especially by compassionate sensitive blushing poets
Aw–love your comment–thanks!
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Excellent
Thanks, C!
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