You shoutafter the after brings silence
but nothing answersexcept this echo
I can feel the cycle in this, bouncing back and forth, around again. Lovely.
Thanks so much!
On Fri, Mar 21, 2014 at 4:48 PM, Susan Daniels Poetry wrote:
Wow, so much in such few lines.
Thanks, WB. I might come back to this, but I think its done.
On Fri, Mar 21, 2014 at 8:09 PM, Susan Daniels Poetry wrote:
It feels “done” to me!
I like you you captured the echo in the poem. Nice!
Aw, thanks! I never even noticed that. really, I swear to God most of my writing is automatic writing 😉
Automatic writing? Mine seems to be mainly manual transmission. 😉
This makes me think about my post about a silent scream.
Thank you. Can you link it?
I will try.
Here is the link to what I wrote. I am still finding my voice as a writer.
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