box canyon

You shout
after the after brings silence

but nothing answers
except this echo

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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12 Responses to box canyon

  1. potterfan97 says:

    I can feel the cycle in this, bouncing back and forth, around again. Lovely.

  2. Widow Beach says:

    Wow, so much in such few lines.

  3. Alice Keys says:

    I like you you captured the echo in the poem. Nice!

  4. ItMatterstoGrey says:

    This makes me think about my post about a silent scream.

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