nothing is sacred
anymore
except the most feelings
& those are caught between the teeth
of beasts we feed tears
& dragged, unspooling
what is our fine
in threads
a spiderwebbed trail
over & through
every(one)thing
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Susan Daniels Poetry 
Wow, that’s good.
Thank you.
On Thu, Mar 20, 2014 at 7:10 PM, Susan Daniels Poetry wrote:
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i would argue everything is sacred, but then again it comes down to how we treat it…the middle section is quite intense and gives reason to sit up…i like the spiderweb trail to every(one)thing as well…i can read that as one or two seperate words.
Thanks, Brian. I agree that most everything is sacred.
On Thu, Mar 20, 2014 at 8:15 PM, Susan Daniels Poetry wrote:
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i like to think of the web of thread..beautiful tapestry too..
sometimes up close the web is loose in the breeze..
but as tapestry flows..
the puzzle laid full..
is put together..
with little pull and tug..
to make it work as ONE
Yes. Beautiful comment.
On Fri, Mar 21, 2014 at 2:36 AM, Susan Daniels Poetry wrote:
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stunning piece , amazing metaphors!
Thank you!
I’d like to think that just because this thread exist all is webbed together and thus sacred.. maybe the spider is sacred 🙂
maybe she is 😉
On Fri, Mar 21, 2014 at 2:52 PM, Susan Daniels Poetry wrote:
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the spiderwebbed trail is a cool image… and yeah…nothing is sacred except the most feelings… sometimes i think we live in a paradox world
Thank you, C. I think we do, as well.
On Fri, Mar 21, 2014 at 3:16 PM, Susan Daniels Poetry wrote:
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Heya Susan – this kinda felt like a song I like and recognize, played through a filter of murk. Not sure that makes any sense, but as usual, you give me something to think about.
Thanks! Which song
On Fri, Mar 21, 2014 at 10:32 PM, Susan Daniels Poetry wrote:
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A couple jump to mind… but have you ever heard “To Our Knees” by Low? It’s on Youtube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eoTYrK04zaY
ooo–thanks–listening now.
My God, I love it. Thanks for sharing it here. Never heard of them.
Indie band. Not very big. The only song of theirs that is somewhat famous is In Metal: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WdH3mTpjq-U
Just a gorgeous, wistful, lonely tune. Perfect for snowy Saturdays.
Very nicely done. Love your way with words, and this is especially well done.
Thank you, Shanyn.
On Sun, Mar 23, 2014 at 4:41 PM, Susan Daniels Poetry wrote:
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Well-crafted. It felt as if emotion itself spooled away, unwinding throughout your poem.