12 Responses to box canyon

1. potterfan97 says:

   March 21, 2014 at 4:48 pm

   I can feel the cycle in this, bouncing back and forth, around again. Lovely.
   • Susan L Daniels says:

     March 21, 2014 at 6:06 pm

     Thanks so much!

     On Fri, Mar 21, 2014 at 4:48 PM, Susan Daniels Poetry wrote:

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2. Widow Beach says:

   March 21, 2014 at 8:09 pm

   Wow, so much in such few lines.
   • Susan L Daniels says:

     March 21, 2014 at 8:15 pm

     Thanks, WB. I might come back to this, but I think its done.

     On Fri, Mar 21, 2014 at 8:09 PM, Susan Daniels Poetry wrote:

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     • Widow Beach says:

       March 21, 2014 at 8:17 pm

       It feels “done” to me!
3. Alice Keys says:

   March 21, 2014 at 9:26 pm

   I like you you captured the echo in the poem. Nice!
   • Susan L Daniels says:

     March 21, 2014 at 9:54 pm

     Aw, thanks! I never even noticed that. really, I swear to God most of my writing is automatic writing 😉
     • Alice Keys says:

       March 22, 2014 at 12:44 am

       Automatic writing? Mine seems to be mainly manual transmission. 😉
4. ItMatterstoGrey says:

   April 2, 2014 at 10:38 am

   This makes me think about my post about a silent scream.
   • Susan L Daniels says:

     April 2, 2014 at 11:08 am

     Thank you. Can you link it?
     • ItMatterstoGrey says:

       April 2, 2014 at 12:06 pm

       I will try.
       • ItMatterstoGrey says:

         April 2, 2014 at 11:24 pm

         Here is the link to what I wrote. I am still finding my voice as a writer.

         http://itmatterstogrey.wordpress.com/2014/03/31/screaming-silence

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