sliver of shimmer
the moon starts her twilight drift
oarless into night


About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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50 Responses to

  1. Green Speck says:

    Beautifully painted words !!!

  2. just beautiful! – perfect image too.

    Fine jewel
    on the neck of night
    she glows calm

  3. ManicDdaily says:

    Lovely – really does look like a beautiful little boat. It’s a lovely pic too – k.

  4. Alice Keys says:

    I like the boat image.

  5. Pranita says:

    Same here… loved ur comparison of moon to boat! Would love to be on that journey!!! Beautiful imagination Susan 🙂

  6. Ramesh Sood says:

    I am happy to be here Susan..good haiku this…with my favourite Moon here.. well I hope you too will feel happy visiting me here..


  7. claudia says:

    her twilight drift
    oarless into night…oh i like much…but now i can’t help to think about how she would look with oars..smiles….and what a cool pic as well…

  8. itsmeenakshi77 says:

    I loved the idea of moon floating oarless in sky. Very innovative!

  9. Very nice indeed – I am late in the comments so all that is left is my ditto ditto ditto of enjoyment 🙂

  10. Look for A Lovely Thing says:

    absolutely stunning. Just wow! I am in awe, Susan.

  11. kaykuala says:

    Give them an opportunity and they would strive to deliver! That is true, Susan!


  12. Oh Susan, this is so beautiful. what lovely imagery 🙂

  13. 4joy says:

    the universe doesn’t need paddles….absolutely beautiful words….

  14. sweet Susan ~ blessings

  15. WabiSabi says:

    I love the sliver moon!

  16. unfetteredbs says:

    Sea of night beautiful scripted

  17. cheryl says:

    This is one of those precious memories of a crescent moon Susan. I am overwhelmed with your words.

  18. Valli says:

    Comparison of moon and boat – Very creative!
    and lovely image!
    wonderful haiku 🙂

  19. nelle says:

    Invisibly tethered, riding the balanced course of gravity and motion.

  20. “twilight drift”, “oarless” what a wonderful way to create an incredible word image.

  21. vidyatiru says:

    oarless … your haiku wowed…

  22. loved tne imagery, the last line was perfect

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