sliver of shimmer
the moon starts her twilight drift
oarless into night
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Susan Daniels Poetry 
Beautifully painted words !!!
GS, thank you!
just beautiful! – perfect image too.
Fine jewel
on the neck of night
she glows calm
Thank you, Noel. Was trying to find one that looked the way the moon did the other night–this was close. Beautiful haiku shared there, too, Noel.
Lovely – really does look like a beautiful little boat. It’s a lovely pic too – k.
Thank you, K. I love Pinterest 😉
You know, I’ve joined but never had time to investigate or load up my board. I should look into it more, and sometime will, I guess. It seems good for elephants!
k.
It is–you would enjoy a trip there!
I like the boat image.
Thank you, Alice.
Same here… loved ur comparison of moon to boat! Would love to be on that journey!!! Beautiful imagination Susan 🙂
Thanks so much, Pranita! I wanted to sail on the shimmer 😉
I am happy to be here Susan..good haiku this…with my favourite Moon here.. well I hope you too will feel happy visiting me here.. http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/02/monday-comes-laughing.html
RS:)
Thanks for the visit, glad you liked, and hopping over to visit you too!
her twilight drift
oarless into night…oh i like much…but now i can’t help to think about how she would look with oars..smiles….and what a cool pic as well…
Claudia, thanks–Yes, I can see some oars up in that sky too 😉
Glad you liked the picture!
I loved the idea of moon floating oarless in sky. Very innovative!
Oh, thanks much!
Very nice indeed – I am late in the comments so all that is left is my ditto ditto ditto of enjoyment 🙂
Stephen, thank you!
absolutely stunning. Just wow! I am in awe, Susan.
Thank you! I was in awe when I saw that moon, tipped “sideways” from how I normally think of a crescent, a few nights ago.
Give them an opportunity and they would strive to deliver! That is true, Susan!
Hank
Thanks, Hank!
Oh Susan, this is so beautiful. what lovely imagery 🙂
Thank you, C.
the universe doesn’t need paddles….absolutely beautiful words….
No, it does not, or a pilot.
sweet Susan ~ blessings
thanks, Deb!
I love the sliver moon!
thank you, WS
Sea of night beautiful scripted
Thanks, Audra!
This is one of those precious memories of a crescent moon Susan. I am overwhelmed with your words.
Cheryl, thank you!
Comparison of moon and boat – Very creative!
and lovely image!
wonderful haiku 🙂
Thank you, Valli!
Invisibly tethered, riding the balanced course of gravity and motion.
Thanks, Nelle. Is it our axial tilt that makes the crescent moon look like a boat this time of year? I wonder…
“twilight drift”, “oarless” what a wonderful way to create an incredible word image.
Gosh, thank you!
Gorgeous.
Thank you, Viv.
oarless … your haiku wowed…
Thank you so much!
loved tne imagery, the last line was perfect
Thank you, Adriana.
Very nice!
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Thanks much, Ann.