The finch is quiet,
though still wings remember heat–
arcs of flight fading
This is either a bit sad or hinting at storms to come.
Likely why I liked it.
Aw … this is superb …
Thank you, Polly.
Beautiful and sad
Thank you, C.
Still wings remember heat… like that lots.
Thank you, Nelle.
Healing~ you’re truly better than Ignotow!
Oh gosh, thanks.
Wow. The dtails of life’s fade, what is remembered, what is forgotten!
That’s it–thanks for commenting, Susan.
Great imagery used here… an works well for both small stones and haiku. TY! 🙂
I’m writing my haiku heights/small stones on my blogspot blog.
Thanks Eliz–will check yours out later!
I like the feeling of quietude about this piece…
Slow Death by Guinness
I’d like to think that the elements of remembrance are fond memories! Great haiku
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