Small stone 1/14

The finch is quiet,
though still wings remember heat–
arcs of flight fading

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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20 Responses to Small stone 1/14

  1. Trent Lewin says:

    This is either a bit sad or hinting at storms to come.

  2. Aw … this is superb …

  3. nelle says:

    Still wings remember heat… like that lots.

  4. Healing~ you’re truly better than Ignotow!

  5. Susan says:

    Wow. The dtails of life’s fade, what is remembered, what is forgotten!

  6. eof737 says:

    Great imagery used here… an works well for both small stones and haiku. TY! 🙂
    I’m writing my haiku heights/small stones on my blogspot blog.
    http://positivekismet.blogspot.com/2013/01/musings-trust.html
    Eliz

  7. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    I like the feeling of quietude about this piece…

    Slow Death by Guinness

  8. I’d like to think that the elements of remembrance are fond memories! Great haiku

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