the i that sees

the i that sees
& she who feels

sum this am
who does

 

***for Octpowrimo, the prompt is “individuality,” AKA, who am I.

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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19 Responses to the i that sees

  1. Green Speck says:

    Mystery lines … I need to read it again !!!

  2. I had to read it twice as well but I felt it in my chest both times. Thank you for sharing.

  3. nelle says:

    Components of human motivation, the sentient version of chlorophyll, eh?

  4. Nelle, you got it…

  5. jmgoyder says:

    ha – wonderful!

  6. vivinfrance says:

    So much said in so few words – the perfect combination.

  7. Shah Wharton says:

    I’m thick – don’t get it? The first stanza – yep! The second 😦 Doh!

  8. Hi, Shah–really condensed, so apologize for the brevity, which could lead to confusion. You are far from thick! “sum this am/who does” means quite simply what I see and how I feel totals who I am that reacts to things, who is, who does things. Does that help?

  9. Wondedrful you. 🙂

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