the i that sees
& she who feels
sum this am
***for Octpowrimo, the prompt is “individuality,” AKA, who am I.
Mystery lines … I need to read it again !!!
Oh, Green, I am sorry. Do not want to give you a headache.
Ha ha … I won’t have a headache … I love the way you play with words 🙂
I had to read it twice as well but I felt it in my chest both times. Thank you for sharing.
Components of human motivation, the sentient version of chlorophyll, eh?
Nelle, you got it…
ha – wonderful!
So much said in so few words – the perfect combination.
Viv, thank you!
I’m thick – don’t get it? The first stanza – yep! The second 😦 Doh!
Hi, Shah–really condensed, so apologize for the brevity, which could lead to confusion. You are far from thick! “sum this am/who does” means quite simply what I see and how I feel totals who I am that reacts to things, who is, who does things. Does that help?
Wondedrful you. 🙂
🙂 thanks, Celestine!
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