simplicity

the feeling you lift up
from inside & hold out
in your hands

perfect
in its singleness, unbroken

breaks me

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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19 Responses to simplicity

  1. Green Speck says:

    This was so touching !!! You are such a great writer … you know how to weave feelings in your words !!!

  2. nelle says:

    Blush away, because you are a great writer.

  3. Love the inhale/exhale quality here… I don’t know if that makes sense, but it is simple yet complex, like what happens when we inhale and exhale….

  4. Anna Stewart says:

    I love the simplicity…gorgeous!

  5. Nice and beautifully painted, though I am still wondering why the intensity you so wonderfully describe should break one!

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