behind shut eyelids
bubbles effervescing dreams
break sleep’s surface

About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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25 Responses to effervescence

  1. Green Speck says:

    Bubbles and dreams are so similar in many ways !!!

  2. Doris says:

    nice, like always…so do not hate me for this but I tagged you http://miartedoris.wordpress.com/2012/10/19/tagged-you-it-ego-art-work-by-alen-kopera/
    I now you do not like this kind of thing but I want to know this 7 questions, please.

  3. unfetteredbs says:

    I like your take on the prompt Susan. Effervescing — nice

  4. Pranita says:

    This is so beautiful… i love this bubble! 🙂
    Now dreams come alive!

  5. Rhonda says:

    Love this image…perfectly sparkly! 🙂

  6. nelle says:

    Ooh, short but like lots lots lots.

  7. MamaTim says:

    A nice dreamy haiku, love it – ♥

  8. Barbara says:

    I love that instant when I bubble up from dreams! Nicely done as usual, Susan.

  9. dulcinaandgnome says:

    Wonderful haiku, Susan, as usual.
    It sounds so ethereal, the three lines beginning with B…
    Happy week.

  10. Beautiful imagery, Susan. Very well written. 🙂

  11. Jolly says:

    I like that idea, of bubbly dreams 🙂

  12. Susan says:

    Totally cool emergence into consciousness.
    If I only could remember nightly dreams.

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