behind shut eyelids
bubbles effervescing dreams
break sleep’s surface
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Bubbles and dreams are so similar in many ways !!!
Yes, they are–and then your mind bubbles through the dreams to wake…
nice, like always…so do not hate me for this but I tagged you http://miartedoris.wordpress.com/2012/10/19/tagged-you-it-ego-art-work-by-alen-kopera/
I now you do not like this kind of thing but I want to know this 7 questions, please.
Sweetie–for you I will answer the questions, but not pass on the tag. Deal?
Deal! Sounds great! I understand it is annoying, but just want to know a bit more about your poetry. Thanks!
Never a problem. Actually, this is a tag I took from Leo a few weeks ago, because I thought it was really cool. So–I pasted a link to my answers from then to your comments…
I like your take on the prompt Susan. Effervescing — nice
thanks, Audra! I liked your percolating to consciousness very much!
This is so beautiful… i love this bubble! 🙂
Now dreams come alive!
Oh, thank you! I loved your waking haiku, too!
Love this image…perfectly sparkly! 🙂
🙂 thanks, Rhonda!
Ooh, short but like lots lots lots.
Thanks, Nelle. When I wake up, I always feel like consciousness is rising up behind my eyelids like a bubble, like I am rising through something.
A nice dreamy haiku, love it – ♥
Oh, thank you, Mama!
I love that instant when I bubble up from dreams! Nicely done as usual, Susan.
Thanks, Barbara!
Wonderful haiku, Susan, as usual.
It sounds so ethereal, the three lines beginning with B…
Happy week.
🙂
Thanks, Dulcina!
Beautiful imagery, Susan. Very well written. 🙂
Thank you, Celestine.
I like that idea, of bubbly dreams 🙂
Totally cool emergence into consciousness.
If I only could remember nightly dreams.
Thank you, Susan!