braid battlefield

no cornrows with beads
for her & no threaded hair
but the long coiled twists

those twists are rasta
fingercombed to sleek ripples–
war over, we twist

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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22 Responses to braid battlefield

  1. Bruce Ruston says:

    War over, we twist inspired line

  2. Very cool poem and very cool hair… 🙂

  3. elleceef says:

    This reminds me of my granddaughters when they were little ones – around 7. Always the question to twist or braid. You haiku brought them back to me. Thank you.

  4. nelle says:

    Sounds like a boatload of fun. So vivid in the imagining…

  5. Hair wars – hair wavy like twisting DNA!

  6. Green Speck says:

    A unique take on the prompt … wonderfully done Susan 🙂

  7. Barbara says:

    Lovely ‘twist’ on the prompt!! How I miss those days of fixing my girls hair!!

  8. No battles and twists for me. It is close croping all the way. 🙂 A nice one, Susan

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