september rain

brings rain we needed
this july
the burned grass
uprooted to mud
leaves crisp red over

About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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19 Responses to september rain

  1. The Enfant Terrible says:

    I need to write a Shadorma. Again, a wonderful piece with such vivid imagery. You are a very talented woman.

  2. boomiebol says:

    Very nice, very true

  3. Green Speck says:

    Beautifully written 🙂

  4. unfetteredbs says:

    you really do these well

  5. nelle says:

    No matter the subject, you produce something worthy.

  6. Mary says:

    If you have a way of communicating with Jeremy, the man to whom you mentioned he should post his poem in dVerse to, could you tell him to check his unmoderated posts or spam? I commented on his poem last night, and tried again this morning. It goes nowhere. I fear it is spam for him. I tried to find a working email address for him, but could not. I hate it when this happens. But since your posts are getting through, maybe you would be kind enough to let him know. Thank you.

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