September Heights: Gloss

bubblegum flavor
pink spreading shiny sweetness
my Maybelline kiss

About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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49 Responses to September Heights: Gloss

  1. Grace says:

    I like the flavor of the shiny kiss ~

  2. Green Speck says:

    Sweet words πŸ™‚

  3. Ramesh Sood says:

    Gloss and lips perhaps attract each other.. .well done..

  4. Barbara says:

    I think I actually had a pink bubblegum gloss!! Those were the days.

  5. boomiebol says:

    Sweet!!!! My maybe line kiss- love

  6. Pranita says:

    I adore this haiku! Too sweet… Cute and hot! πŸ˜‰
    Euphoria in music

  7. Seb says:

    Oh, Maybelline. Why can’t you be true?

  8. unfetteredbs says:

    ohh you made me smile big

  9. The Enfant Terrible says:

    Sickly sweet and flavorsome… Yummy!

  10. nelle says:

    Years ago, I received bubblegum chapstick as cellphone company swag, IIRC in Madison WI. I liked it. πŸ™‚

  11. Bruce Ruston says:

    adjusting collar fonzie style while taking cold shower, nice write

  12. Ellecee says:

    Love this, it is very sweet your “Maybelline kiss” Well done.

  13. Another one on lip gloss lipstick … nicely done.

  14. ManicDdaily says:

    Very clever: so sharp and sweet. k.

  15. lessandragr says:

    Wow! Not just imagery but smell, too! Really nice.

  16. Patti says:

    Very sweet and innocent. It reminds me of a teenage girl just figuring out that boys have some value. πŸ™‚

  17. Dulcina says:

    Full of good taste, delicious haiku.

  18. Sanjana says:

    woho ho ho..your Maybelline kiss is seducing πŸ˜‰ good work!!

  19. Susan says:

    Those lipsticks were made for delightful images like this one.

  20. Karin Wiberg says:

    First thing I thought of when I saw the prompt was Bonne Bell Lip Smacker!! πŸ™‚

  21. Deliciously sweet Haiku

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