Invisible hands
tease hair with agile fingers
breathe away summer

About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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54 Responses to wind

  1. Hi Susan…thanks for sharing 🙂
    Yes it is the end of summer….now you need a haiku that expresses the transition of season..LoL

  2. Ramesh Sood says:

    This is beautifully done Susan… a pure haiku… but then heart has its seasons too..


  3. mimijk says:

    Wold that those fingers weren’t so agile..I hate to see the summer go (though it’s been hot as all get out)…beautiful as always, me

  4. As it is meant to be … very well written.

  5. Seb says:

    It’s an ill wind but it blows pretty good here!

  6. Barbara says:

    I love haiku that demands a reread and thought! Thanks

  7. Seb & Chervefeuile–thank you!

  8. poetrydiary says:

    Still contemplating the invisible hands. I suspect I’ll see them everywhere now…

  9. unfetteredbs says:

    you nailed it(again) I can feel it..totally

  10. The Enfant Terrible says:

    Wonderful! Simple yet expressive.. Just what we like! I have been conscious of this transition from Summer to Fall for a while now. Well done!

  11. Ellecee says:

    I can feel those “agile fingers” in my hair. Well done.

  12. Patti says:

    Very unusual take on the prompt. I like your agile fingers.

  13. nelle says:

    I refuse to believe summer packs its bags for its southern visit. No no no. 🙂

  14. Locomente says:

    Invisible hands,,,
    Agile fingers…
    Beautiful choice of words….

  15. Green Speck says:

    I couldn’t have every imagined wind to be so romantic !!! Great one 🙂

  16. Rallentanda says:

    Beautiful…very very good!

  17. Beautifully done, as usual

  18. A season that we want to stay longer is sometimes too agile to leave quickly. Excellent haiku.

  19. Jolly says:

    Loved your description of the wind! Summer is coming our way 🙂 Yay!

  20. 4joy says:

    that felt like a warm zephyr….lovely

  21. Susan says:

    That’s wind as I know it!

  22. pure beautiful haiku 🙂

  23. good one..the wind truely teases our hair. Loved it.

  24. The fingers may be agile, but if they belong to autumn, then they must be a bit arthritic too! 🙂

    An Agile Threesome

  25. Leo says:

    Like the wind 🙂 Hair’s a mess, but atleast its cool 😀

  26. Beautiful flow of haiku

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