tease hair with agile fingers
breathe away summer
Hi Susan…thanks for sharing 🙂
Yes it is the end of summer….now you need a haiku that expresses the transition of season..LoL
I did that too, a few days ago, with 3 haiku for autumn…
This is beautifully done Susan… a pure haiku… but then heart has its seasons too..
Oh, thanking you, Ramesh!
Wold that those fingers weren’t so agile..I hate to see the summer go (though it’s been hot as all get out)…beautiful as always, me
Mimi–me too, although I love autumn.
I do too..it’s just the speed with which time seems to pass that gets me..I’m in no hurry!
As it is meant to be … very well written.
It’s an ill wind but it blows pretty good here!
I love haiku that demands a reread and thought! Thanks
Seb & Chervefeuile–thank you!
Still contemplating the invisible hands. I suspect I’ll see them everywhere now…
Hope that’s a good thing…
you nailed it(again) I can feel it..totally
Thanks–that’s what I think of when wind plays with our hair 😉
agile??? I just read todays– ugh
yes–these are HARD.
i posted my comments backwards… oops
haa long day. let me rephrase.. I love your take on agile and ugh on me figuring this prompt out
Wonderful! Simple yet expressive.. Just what we like! I have been conscious of this transition from Summer to Fall for a while now. Well done!
Thanks, Soraya! Yes–the transition seems to be a bit ahead of the calendar, but I am loving it!
Yup! I also love the wonderful colors at this time of year, too. All those reds… A visual feast!
I can feel those “agile fingers” in my hair. Well done.
Thank you–yes–they almost try to braid your hair, don’t they? I used to think of that when my hair was long.
Very unusual take on the prompt. I like your agile fingers.
Thank you, Patti!
I refuse to believe summer packs its bags for its southern visit. No no no. 🙂
I don’t want to believe it either–where did the time go?
Beautiful choice of words….
thank you so much!
I couldn’t have every imagined wind to be so romantic !!! Great one 🙂
oh, thanks 🙂
Know what you mean–but it is. Also playful!
Beautiful…very very good!
Oh my, thanks so very much!
Beautifully done, as usual
A season that we want to stay longer is sometimes too agile to leave quickly. Excellent haiku.
Hazel, thank you!
Loved your description of the wind! Summer is coming our way 🙂 Yay!
Yes–we need to share it–can’t keep it this side of the equator forever…sigh. Say hello to it for me!
that felt like a warm zephyr….lovely
That’s wind as I know it!
Those agile fingers messing up our hair 😉
pure beautiful haiku 🙂
THank you! Much better than the “rendered” one 😉
good one..the wind truely teases our hair. Loved it.
Oh, I am so glad you liked it 🙂
The fingers may be agile, but if they belong to autumn, then they must be a bit arthritic too! 🙂
An Agile Threesome
Nah–November fingers are arthritic.
Like the wind 🙂 Hair’s a mess, but atleast its cool 😀
Beautiful flow of haiku
Thank you Clestine.
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