breathe

I want to take you into me
necessary as air, and as sweet
so close our breathing matches
my inhalation/your exhalation
blended breath

About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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21 Responses to breathe

  1. passionate and all consuming!!!

  2. Jeremy Nathan Marks says:

    This is very good. I wonder if you could take this approach even further in another poem?

  3. Beautiful! Deep breath!

  4. I gasped while reading this!

  5. Patricia Chenayi Nyandoro says:

    Whaw! That’s deep Susan!

  6. Vitalis Choto says:

    Simply breath taking!

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