there was always this light
refracting, reflecting, nourishing
this sun all life basks in
or stretches leaves toward
an energy to capture
or revel inside
how does something timeless
feel so new?
there was always this light
refracting, reflecting, nourishing
this sun all life basks in
or stretches leaves toward
an energy to capture
or revel inside
how does something timeless
feel so new?
that’s fantastic susan, i love your poetry
Thanks so much Kyle–love yours too (even when it turns my face red–or maybe because of it!).
I say…let’s ask a sapling that has found life because of that wonderful refracting, reflecting, nourishing light. shall we?
Just beautiful Susan…you find the poem in all things!
R
Thanks so much, Rhonda. I really think sometimes the poem in all things finds me, not the other way around….especially ones like these that hit and must be written, almost on autopilot.
they may find you…true…but they have no voice without you. you make them live!!!
Aww, you are so sweet.
very solid susan and it has a wonderful feel to it. i updated my last one from last night. you might like it.
I will def take a look, Don–I always like your poetry!
I close my eyes and let the sun beat, I know newness every time it dances on my skin,But now I am waiting on the promises of rain that cools the beat. Nice write
Thanks, Ian–supposed to get rain here, tomorrow, too–hope you get rained on too!
…and wonderful.
thanks so much, Nelle.
Brilliant ~absolutely brilliant in its all encompassing power in your words! Encore!
Wow, Deb, thanks so much–you are making me blush!
how does something timeless
feel so new?
Timelessness is a quality of beauty and energy! Beauty and energy renew!
And yes, all life seeks light – plants especially, where movement is in two directions – a deepening penetration of the roots into the earth and a reaching out to embrace the sun, both movements mutually reinforcing. The more the sapling reaches to the sun, the deeper its roots enter the earth, and the more it also becomes adept at reaching out to the sun – Joyous and amazing phototropism – the outcome of a beautiful mixture of biology, chemistry and physics – a beauty which Susan captures in this short poem.
thanks, Noel! I am so drawn to the natural world, the lessons it can teach us if we watch…