unguarded

because I did not think
my heart needed shielding

you just walked inside,
one kiss key to all my locks

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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13 Responses to unguarded

  1. doncarroll says:

    right to the point on this one. i certainly relate to that. it can be two fold though as i see it. when the muse comes it walzes right in. just a take on it.

  2. Susan this is catchy greatness!

  3. Rhonda says:

    Could not have said it better or more beautifully Susan. I think I love you! ROFL…my sistah from another mothah!!

  4. Nice, compact but powerful. Amazing Susan how you manage to say so much so powerfully in so few words! Such skills in singing and wordsmithing!
    Incidentally, another title for this poem could be “the wordsmith and the locksmith” 🙂
    well done!

  5. can I tweet this beautiful song?

  6. jeglatter says:

    Yep.:) Great work!:) -Jennifer

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