everything I am
stretches towards
& yearns to burn electric
my skin
rippling pure energy
barely time to say yes
& again
that same yes
a strike that cannot be cooled
by just rain
after thunder
rattles my bones
with its power
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Susan Daniels Poetry 
Quite intense there, Susan. And begging interpretation, I think.
Hi George–check out my comments on this post from Kyle–explains it–and I do believe he did a better job than I did 🙂
http://kylemew.com/2012/05/29/storm/
oh wow – i love this – so hot – okay if i add a link from my site?
sure–mind if I post a link here, so George understands the backstory? 🙂
…think its great we had the same idea, expressed in completely different ways
sure – i like that idea too
Thanks ever so much! 🙂
except can you approve my comment so our dialog is in there? 🙂
? all comments get approved automatically i thought ?
for some reason mine didn’t show up, they are there now, though–thanks much!
Electric, zingy, powerful, intense, beautiful!
Thank you! A thunder-stormy morning was the inspiration–loads of them rolling through today.
Wow! happy for you!
the rain was needed, for sure.
Out here the sky is low and the humidity heavy so whatever electricity I was feeling is struggling to reignite very damp, mouldering kindling! 🙂
🙂
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yearns to burn electric… nice visual.
Thanks so much.
very intense for sure. couple things come to mind. one a fear of storms and two would be the human element of some ire. definitely like the feel.
A little off from my intention, but all interpretations are valid 🙂
Perfect, as thunder rattles in the distance.
Thank you Nelle
Takes me places I’ve been and want to return to time and time again. I’m happy to see you are a fellow lover of the storm who feels beyond the rain. 🙂
R
Why, thank you (turning shades of red)
🙂
Very nice, sure would be nice to have a storm back here, just to clear the air and cool the summer just for a while 🙂
sad part it, the summer’s only just begun 🙂
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