unguarded

Posted on May 30, 2012 by Susan L Daniels

because I did not think
my heart needed shielding

you just walked inside,
one kiss key to all my locks

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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13 Responses to unguarded

  1. doncarroll's avatar doncarroll says:
    May 30, 2012 at 2:58 am

    right to the point on this one. i certainly relate to that. it can be two fold though as i see it. when the muse comes it walzes right in. just a take on it.

  2. Arrows & Metaphors's avatar Mari Sanchez Cayuso says:
    May 30, 2012 at 3:36 am

    Susan this is catchy greatness!

  3. Rhonda's avatar Rhonda says:
    May 30, 2012 at 3:50 am

    Could not have said it better or more beautifully Susan. I think I love you! ROFL…my sistah from another mothah!!

  4. Noel Ihebuzor's avatar Noel Ihebuzor says:
    May 30, 2012 at 4:07 am

    Nice, compact but powerful. Amazing Susan how you manage to say so much so powerfully in so few words! Such skills in singing and wordsmithing!
    Incidentally, another title for this poem could be “the wordsmith and the locksmith” 🙂
    well done!

  5. Noel Ihebuzor's avatar Noel Ihebuzor says:
    May 30, 2012 at 12:05 pm

    can I tweet this beautiful song?

  6. jeglatter's avatar jeglatter says:
    May 30, 2012 at 2:32 pm

    Yep.:) Great work!:) -Jennifer

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