in response to…..

you are a little boy
toying with women
instead of matches


telling me
you know how
my pleasure works

I could show you
& should
how to titillate
& inflame

you would
awake in ashes
after we have together
burned the house down

****check out this post for the inspiration–thanks crunks!

About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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4 Responses to in response to…..

  1. This is the riot act! Heart breakers, Don Juans and all who treat things deep and sacred with levity in your quests for physicality, better beware! All those trapped in web of eternal boyhood (read immaturity) beware. Do not toy with us and do not start fires and these may burn you!

  2. Noel, you so understand this! It takes a grown woman or a real man (i.e., a true lover of women, or tender of that sacred fire), to see that this poem is not meant to stimulate, but to warn…..

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