When a wonderful poet writes a poem your lines inspire, you share it…you have to. Thank you so much, David! You are awesome!

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Someone I know

Finds the big in the small

Others wearily drift through the mundane and banal

Everyday moments

Just life passing by

But my friend is an alchemist of thought and word

She pulls on kaleidoscope glasses

Crystallizes each moment

With surgical precision

In words

Finds insight

Connections

Lessons

Everywhere

I picture her with paper and pen

Out for a walk

Going shopping

Herding children at the fair

Sitting at a red light

Capturing the fleeting thoughts

That all too often shimmer briefly and disappear

For the rest of us

She doesn’t let them go

She knows how transitory insight can be

Stabs them with a ballpoint

Captures phrases on crumpled pages

Transmogrifies the unknowable

With the poet’s art

With ease and grace

And sends each missive

To the world

To share

And delight

 

David Trudel    ©  2012

 

Dedicated to Susan L. Daniels.

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Lois (a love poem)

it was simply her
for him, and he hers
when they let themselves
scale all their losses
piled up & sealed
in that stone mountain
between them

how easy they made it look,
that climb to reach each other
without dynamic lines
or other safety nets

sweet to watch
the gruff man’s gentleness
flower to smiles
& her distance
thaw to blushing

later

when she forgot
all but her mother’s name
& even still later
when she no longer had words

she knew him

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Zoe’s spinet

 

gotten for the cost
of hauling it here
& feeding four friends
who heave it through
my sliding glass door

is the instrument
I said she could learn
as it will not decay
in that jungle
she calls her room–
no mushrooms will sprout
in a mouthpiece
& it will not hide
under piles of socks

or get kicked under a bed

& I will finally learn
when she starts to play

if jazz is genetic

 

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if he shouts his silence (for R)

if he shouts his silence
you will hear it quietly

& your eyes
will whisper truth

making way for words

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Eulonia spun some magic tonight. I have to spread this brilliance.

eulonia's avatareulonia country

shannon is turning to gold
in a bathtub in texas
while i fold laundry
in my room
alone.

i think of the steps leading
into the river
how i would have
followed you until
we made up our mud beds
and learned to speak catfish
fresh whiskers sprouting
from each side of
our mouths.

i am still trying to invent
a language for our love
to write its letters in
what shape to make
the signs in the woods
that lead to where all stairs
blossom.

what happens to the altars when we go,
who finds our half-built houses in the weeds?

what cat stalks
the mouse i have become
will i rest at last on the carpet
in your bedroom
my body snapped
in half, tail missing
dark eyes wide
and open?

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artistry (2 poems)

1.

her voice over violins or guitar
always knows far more than it sings;
songs with secrets throbbing against glass
like hummingbird wings
or luna moths at night
whisper-humming through moonlight

2.

she never just sits.
she arranges herself
the only place
in a room
where sun will draw
her shadow thinly
on the wall
or across the floor

everything posed
in such easy elegance

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Language, Suzanne Vega

I was in the mood for a little Suzanne V tonight…This one seemed apropos.

“Language”

If language were liquid
It would be rushing in
Instead here we are
In a silence more eloquent
Than any word could ever beThese words are too solid
They don’t move fast enough
To catch the blur in the brain
That flies by and is gone
Gone
Gone
Gone

I’d like to meet you
In a timeless, placeless place
Somewhere out of context
And beyond all consequences

Let’s go back to the building
(Words are too solid)
On Little West Twelfth
It is not far away
(They don’t move fast enough)
And the river is there
And the sun and the spaces
Are all laying low
(To catch the blur in the brain)
And we’ll sit in the silence
(That flies by and is)
That comes rushing in and is
Gone (Gone)

I won’t use words again
They don’t mean what I meant
They don’t say what I said
They’re just the crust of the meaning
With realms underneath
Never touched
Never stirred
Never even moved through

If language were liquid
It would be rushing in
Instead here we are
In a silence more eloquent
Than any word could ever be

And is gone
Gone
Gone
And is gone

***just to clarify–the link to click on to listen to her song is in the title 🙂

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