the unfolding sweetness your kisses bring
deeply hidden, past where lips together
join and learn a language of sighs, feather
soft promises of pleasure murmured, rising
in heartbeats faster than the frantic wings
of a hummingbird rushing to nectar
before it loses brightness, turns bitter
in the throat of one shaped to sip and sing
i need to celebrate you in octaves,
exhale feeling lifted in major keys,
our pulse the tempo, and passion the beat
something in minor is far too plaintive,
and difficult to capture in trochees
the exact way your touch makes me spark heat
This is only my second sonnet, ever. Please be kind. Anyway, this is what we are doing over at the Dverse Pub today. Please join us if form does not give you fits.