my revelation
shows everything hidden in
this tentative heart
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Aw, love this Susan, very tender 🙂
Thank you Paul. My Baptist origins usually lead me to the apocalypse when I see that prompt word. This was a quiet rebellion against that 😉
I love the last line.
Oh, thank you, Kathy.
Good one … that last line … is wonderful.
Oh, thanking you!
Ah beautiful… the tentative heart!
Thank you, Barbara!
So lovely and sweet.
Melanie
Melanie–thank you!
Very romantic. I agree. The last line is wonderful.
Oh, Patti–thank you!
susan is on fire again.. look out! nicely done on a tough prompt
Thanks, Audra! It was a tough one, but fun!
just the way it should be 😉 🙂
L–thanks so much. 😉
“this tentative heart” – such a lovely phrase.
Elle–thank you. I am a bit on the shy side…
Tentative is good, teamed with evaluative.
Thanks, Nelle. yes, it is!
superb!
🙂
A secret chamber unwittingly stores many secrets! Nicely Susan!
Hank
Oh, thanks so much, hank!
Leaves more to the imagination…nice. BTW, I love your daughter’s self portrait!
Thank you, Katy! I love my daughter’s cartoony art 😉
really liked it
Thanks, Bruce. Been in a sentimental mood the last few days 😉
Lovely use of the prompt !!!
Thanks, GS!
A fine and lovely take on the prompt. This has a romantic feel to it. 🙂
Oh, Thanks, Celestine!
‘tentative heart’ liked that a lot…
Jolly–thanks much!
it’s all there in your ‘tentative heart’…..lovely haiku
oh, gosh, thanks. So much of feeling is tentative, isn’t it?
tentative heart and definitive revelations? If hearts could be see through…..if hearts…
another great haiku
Oh, I think your comment is even better than the haiku–really enjoy your insights. Thanks for liking.
Must be a lot in there, judging from your frequency of writing 🙂
Ken–sometimes, it is a very crowded place 😉
I am well acquainted with a “tentative heart”—because it resides in me!
Revelation
Aw–thank you–shy people of the world–unite!