to inspire
my poetry
someone is either a lover
or dead?
Thank the universe
I have no dead lovers.
Yet.
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Crike. This sent a chill through me.
It was supposed to be the perfect balance between creepy and funny. Might have k3eaned too far into creepy?
I don’t think so, it gripped me, and I like being gripped like that. Definitely stays with me. Plus, I love creepy.
I also love creepy, and October is the month for it. Brian Carlin reversed all my sentences (see below) and it still works. How about that?
Yet…
I have no dead lovers.
Thank the universe
Someone is either a lover
Or dead
To inspire my poetry.
Oddly, that works too!
Oh crike, that totally works too! This is messing my mind a bit now… can’t tell which I like better. They both spiral in the same way and bring me some sense of largeness, which I like. Plus some creepy. I think Susan that you’re one is creepier (which I love), and Brian’s is is more poet-y. Or something. Both are awesome.
Why thank you!
I kind of want to put what Brian did underneath. Heh.
What say you, Brian? Want to be a co-author on this piece with me?
That would tickle me pinkly!
Me too!!!! CPS nab rider it done!
Consider….oops
ok.
Brian’s getting pink ticklies and Trent is getting gripped “like that”
so yes, I’d say this is definitely creepy.
Me? I just though it sounded like a threat.
So good to see your words, Susan.