Tilus series–dVerse meeting the bar

Posted on May 15, 2014 by Susan L Daniels

At dawn an unbroken
spiderweb

glows

delicate, like this day,
easily

snapped

About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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36 Responses to Tilus series–dVerse meeting the bar

  1. Victoria C. Slotto says:
    May 15, 2014 at 12:44 pm

    This is stunning, Susan. I love to see those webs when they are full of dew and back-lit by the sun.

  2. claudia says:
    May 15, 2014 at 1:19 pm

    i found those dew-soaked webs so mesmerizingly beautiful… very cool image….i could see it sparkle..

  3. Susan says:
    May 15, 2014 at 2:00 pm

    I. Love. This. Trying not to snap creation(s)!

  4. brian miller says:
    May 15, 2014 at 2:04 pm

    nice…i like how you linked yours
    the spiderwebs first thing in the morning
    are cool…like a bit of spider art….

  6. Sumana Roy says:
    May 15, 2014 at 2:18 pm

    i love how you’ve strung beauty and vulnerability of Nature….

  7. Ray Sharp says:
    May 15, 2014 at 2:18 pm

    delicate, like this day… I like how you link nature to emotion

  8. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says:
    May 15, 2014 at 2:20 pm

    The spider webs are beautiful but the different way to interpret the second one is stunning

  9. Starralee says:
    May 15, 2014 at 3:31 pm

    “Stunning”, I agree–and the ending resonates with me, as some days are so easily “snapped”.

  10. CC Champagne says:
    May 15, 2014 at 3:34 pm

    With so few words you make me think in images. Lovely!

  11. freyathewriter says:
    May 15, 2014 at 4:40 pm

    Spiders’ webs with those jewels of dew… fragile, delicate – some of my favourite things in nature. Lovely.

  12. Grace says:
    May 15, 2014 at 5:58 pm

    I love the use of spiders, then snapping at the end just pops ~ Short & powerful verses Susan ~

  13. charliezero1.wordpress.com says:
    May 15, 2014 at 6:30 pm

    Spiders are the most fragile creatures of our planet.

    I love your style here and the message. 🙂

  14. Alice Keys says:
    May 15, 2014 at 7:12 pm

    Great metaphor. I felt the “snap”.

  16. Truedessa says:
    May 15, 2014 at 8:27 pm

    witty..spiderwebs really are amazing unbroken

  17. kathy reed says:
    May 15, 2014 at 10:40 pm

    As all say, the first is amazing and the second is genius!

  18. Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade) says:
    May 16, 2014 at 12:50 am

    Very beautiful!

  19. hypercryptical says:
    May 16, 2014 at 3:18 am

    Perfect.
    Anna :o]

  20. kelvin s.m. says:
    May 16, 2014 at 3:22 am

    ..that unbroken cobweb tilus is too special… thank you Susan… smiles…

  21. Yousei Hime says:
    May 16, 2014 at 11:58 am

    I like how they work together and can stand alone.

  22. The Course of Our Seasons says:
    May 16, 2014 at 3:23 pm

    love how you spun these together – beautiful image! K

  23. arathi says:
    May 17, 2014 at 10:55 am

    I loved the spider….. Susan….I missed the linky :(( I have published mine in my blog:))

  24. charlypriest says:
    May 19, 2014 at 8:21 am

    That was great, another new type of style of poem I haven´t read yet, thanks for sharing.

  26. Jeremy Nathan Marks says:
    May 20, 2014 at 11:44 am

    How true this is on so many levels. Nicely done, Susan. 🙂

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