NaPoWriMo Day 4: Spring Haiku

No blooms yet
but the air softens
into spring

About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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16 Responses to NaPoWriMo Day 4: Spring Haiku

  1. Susan, this is my favorite syllable count for haiku:) I did one today too, well sort of…it’s a lune with a 3-5-3 word count

  2. BroadBlogs says:

    I can feel the softness.

  3. Alice Keys says:

    I LOVE the simplicity of this. It leaves me room for my head to paint the rest.

  4. Haikus are lovely, so simple yet elegant. No blooms where you are? 😮 I love how I can feel Spring coming in full… errr bloom.. 😉

  5. nelle says:

    Right direction.

  6. biggerthanalasagna says:

    I could smell the softer air in your poem, really nice.

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