No blooms yet
but the air softens
into spring
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Susan Daniels Poetry 
Susan, this is my favorite syllable count for haiku:) I did one today too, well sort of…it’s a lune with a 3-5-3 word count
Thanks, Angie. This bare bones form is so DAMNED difficult.
Funny…I feel a plethora of words are so prone to wander (aimlessly in my case,) 😏
lovely!
Thank you, C.
On Fri, Apr 4, 2014 at 12:43 PM, Susan Daniels Poetry wrote:
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I can feel the softness.
Thank you, Georgia.
On Fri, Apr 4, 2014 at 1:41 PM, Susan Daniels Poetry wrote:
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I LOVE the simplicity of this. It leaves me room for my head to paint the rest.
Thank you so much 😉
On Fri, Apr 4, 2014 at 2:47 PM, Susan Daniels Poetry wrote:
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🙂
Haikus are lovely, so simple yet elegant. No blooms where you are? 😮 I love how I can feel Spring coming in full… errr bloom.. 😉
Getting there 😉
Right direction.
Finally! Sort of. In fits and starts.
I could smell the softer air in your poem, really nice.
Thank you!