what can I bring
to this banquet
but crumbs?

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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  1. annotating60 says:

    Your lovely self.>KB

  2. tjtherien says:

    this is fantastic Susan… sums up how I feel on most occasions…

  3. You know…when I think of crumbs, I envision our souls being turned into crumbs. I wonder how that would look like in a metaphor?

    Excellent.

  4. BroadBlogs says:

    I don’t know. Your crumbs are pretty yummy.

  5. That was simple but powerful, darling. I loved that you broke it up into small, bite-size pieces.

  6. potterfan97 says:

    BOOM. Love the brevity – may not be long, but boy is it deep 😉

  7. I think it depends to who you give your crumbs that truly matter~they either see it as a banquet of fat things or chaff, but it’s the other who decides.

  8. I read depth and profoundness in these simple words.

  9. well damn, Susan. just, DAMN!

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