dawn

For a feeling
that breaks into blossom
where dreams seed

there are no adequate words

but there are colors
that tell it

and those I would paint
over sunrise, backlit

if I had the right brush

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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16 Responses to dawn

  1. jeglatter says:

    Yes that is where it is.:) Beautiful!
    -Jennifer

  2. George Ellington says:

    Your words have always struck my vision with the vibrancy of the fullest palette, Susan. Your words paint the dawn with such honesty.

  3. wow! Just beautiful!

  4. Smooth fluidity of words, Susan

  5. potterfan97 says:

    Very, very nice 🙂 I can never find the right brush either.

  6. nelle says:

    I’m thinking you would be a great finger painter.

  7. What a merging and immersing of delicacy !

  8. Painting is like a dream while awake… 😉 Love it!

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