dawn

Posted on May 6, 2013 by Susan L Daniels

For a feeling
that breaks into blossom
where dreams seed

there are no adequate words

but there are colors
that tell it

and those I would paint
over sunrise, backlit

if I had the right brush

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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16 Responses to dawn

  1. jeglatter's avatar jeglatter says:
    May 6, 2013 at 12:24 pm

    Yes that is where it is.:) Beautiful!
    -Jennifer

  2. Gaelic Dreams's avatar George Ellington says:
    May 6, 2013 at 12:55 pm

    Your words have always struck my vision with the vibrancy of the fullest palette, Susan. Your words paint the dawn with such honesty.

  3. Noel Ihebuzor's avatar Noel Ihebuzor says:
    May 6, 2013 at 1:35 pm

    wow! Just beautiful!

  4. readinpleasure's avatar readinpleasure says:
    May 6, 2013 at 1:50 pm

    Smooth fluidity of words, Susan

  5. Natalie Keller's avatar potterfan97 says:
    May 6, 2013 at 3:28 pm

    Very, very nice 🙂 I can never find the right brush either.

  6. nelle's avatar nelle says:
    May 7, 2013 at 4:59 pm

    I’m thinking you would be a great finger painter.

  7. I HAVE A VOICE's avatar I HAVE A VOICE says:
    May 7, 2013 at 8:25 pm

    What a merging and immersing of delicacy !

  8. Mary Robertson's avatar Mary Robertson says:
    May 8, 2013 at 9:43 am

    Painting is like a dream while awake… 😉 Love it!

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