lune(acy): A Collom lune chain

Posted on April 28, 2013 by Susan L Daniels

If I say
peepers chime new constellations,  danced
along the treeline,

instead of simply
sighing because  beauty breaks sweet
these spring nights,

blame the moon
for this clarity, my blood
spun into sound

that only perigee
can make sing.

About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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12 Responses to lune(acy): A Collom lune chain

  1. yeoldefoole says:
    April 28, 2013 at 4:08 pm

    this is wonderful!!!

  2. Polly Robinson says:
    April 28, 2013 at 5:00 pm

    You’re in love with perigee! Aw ~ how sweet 🙂

  4. johnnycrabcakes says:
    April 28, 2013 at 11:01 pm

    Some words are like that, neh? They stick to you, like a leaf caught in your hair, clung in your weft for a while.

  5. shrinksarentcheap says:
    April 29, 2013 at 11:32 am

    blaming the moon for clarity rings so truthful. i shall spend the next hours cleaving a lot from that line.

  6. nelle says:
    May 1, 2013 at 9:32 pm

    Ooh, that was creative… love.

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