morning’s a rough slap
on the cheek, chasing dreams
under the pillow
Warm light, gentle stream,
a golden necklace stretching
across rested frames
light dances on fields
of belligerent sleep, chasing
crows and hard scarecrows
JCC, this is magical!
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rainbow light touches
kaleidoscope of colours
open flower buds
no idea really – just thought I’d join in (runs)
Why are you running! Come back here! Beautiful haiku!
3 second decision what will I do, I wrote it then read the Sunlight part – it sort of fits…kinda…. 😦 ta hun
It fits, so well. Off to get coffee.
🙂 too kind
I want to chase after them…
Me too. instead, I am off to get an iced capp and then time for this one to work. Hope those dreams wait for me under the pillow.
Morning’s a rude wake
Two boys at it over toys
What else is new, mum?
Have a nice day, Susan 🙂
Hahaha–mine now fight over the Kindle Fire nonstop. Lord help us.
Don’t you just hate that?
Oh, yes. Yes, I do. They CANNOT share electronics, let alone toys.
Not ever had to experience that, but I surely do hate the sudden waking thing. Probably just as well I don’t have the problem of someone else waking me. I do that for myself in the early watches of the morning. Depression will do that. At least I can only get crabby with myself. hHo hum.
Difficulty with sun light.
Remedied by you.
Everybody putcha love glasses on:)
Hee, hee. Love the response, Angie!
That feeling of disappointment at the loss of a dream, night last. Good dreams about my children, I wish would go on without end.
I know what you mean, and in those cases, morning is a rude assault on the senses.
Short and sharp! I like it!
isnt morning a four letter word? ugh wonderful romp through haikus
Yes, I had no idea what I’d started! Fun!
aahh this was very eye squinting as if I were afraid to read the next line~ but i loved it!
pretty much described my morning here in Akron, OH this morning.
Heh, understand that too well. Sometimes mornings are rude.
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