Sunlight

Posted on April 17, 2013 by Susan L Daniels

morning’s a rough slap
on the cheek, chasing dreams
under the pillow

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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29 Responses to Sunlight

  1. Noel Ihebuzor's avatar Noel Ihebuzor says:
    April 17, 2013 at 9:56 am

    Warm light, gentle stream,
    a golden necklace stretching
    across rested frames

  2. J. Alex Pan's avatar johnnycrabcakes says:
    April 17, 2013 at 10:03 am

    light dances on fields
    of belligerent sleep, chasing
    crows and hard scarecrows

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  4. ramblingsfromamum's avatar ramblingsfromamum says:
    April 17, 2013 at 11:06 am

    rainbow light touches
    kaleidoscope of colours
    open flower buds

    no idea really – just thought I’d join in (runs)

  5. Georgia's avatar shrinksarentcheap says:
    April 17, 2013 at 11:16 am

    I want to chase after them…

  6. readinpleasure's avatar readinpleasure says:
    April 17, 2013 at 1:02 pm

    Morning’s a rude wake
    Two boys at it over toys
    What else is new, mum?

    Have a nice day, Susan 🙂

  7. nobodysreadingme's avatar nobodysreadingme says:
    April 17, 2013 at 2:24 pm

    Don’t you just hate that?

    • Susan L Daniels's avatar Susan L Daniels says:
      April 17, 2013 at 2:55 pm

      Oh, yes. Yes, I do. They CANNOT share electronics, let alone toys.

      • nobodysreadingme's avatar nobodysreadingme says:
        April 17, 2013 at 3:03 pm

        Not ever had to experience that, but I surely do hate the sudden waking thing. Probably just as well I don’t have the problem of someone else waking me. I do that for myself in the early watches of the morning. Depression will do that. At least I can only get crabby with myself. hHo hum.

  8. AC Writes's avatar angieinspired says:
    April 17, 2013 at 2:32 pm

    Brief debility–
    Difficulty with sun light.
    Remedied by you.

    Everybody putcha love glasses on:)

  9. nelle's avatar nelle says:
    April 17, 2013 at 4:12 pm

    That feeling of disappointment at the loss of a dream, night last. Good dreams about my children, I wish would go on without end.

  10. hollyannegetspoetic's avatar hollyannegetspoetic says:
    April 17, 2013 at 7:11 pm

    Short and sharp! I like it!

  11. michael's avatar purple says:
    April 17, 2013 at 8:04 pm

    isnt morning a four letter word? ugh wonderful romp through haikus

  12. I HAVE A VOICE's avatar I HAVE A VOICE says:
    April 17, 2013 at 8:40 pm

    aahh this was very eye squinting as if I were afraid to read the next line~ but i loved it!

  13. mobius faith's avatar mobius faith says:
    April 18, 2013 at 7:59 pm

    pretty much described my morning here in Akron, OH this morning.

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