lilies and ireland

tiger lilies, proud
cacophony of orange
can’t hide green stems

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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34 Responses to lilies and ireland

  1. I agree with David. Looking forward to reading the larger poem. 🙂

  2. Alice Keys says:

    I like how this twists across the senses with the sound orange makes..

  3. WabiSabi says:

    Tiger lilies are wildly, gloriously orange and do create a welcome cacophony in the garden. Thanks for reminding me summer is around the corner!

  4. Your use of color to convey the prompt is as brilliant as the orange.

  5. oneofaclass says:

    Well done! I always wanted to use “orange” in a poem… 😉

  6. Green Speck says:

    Green will show up !!!

  7. Oooooh, cacophony, a fave word 🙂

  8. unfetteredbs says:

    I love the way in so few words you made me picture a sea full of orange. Nicely done

  9. unfetteredbs says:

    and green– doh comment got cut off.

  10. Sanjana says:

    I enjoyed the idea of presenting the colors as being in caciohony..really nice 🙂

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  11. nelle says:

    I need a bit more of this on the cusp of more (8-14) snow.

  12. prema says:

    very visual, very dramatic ! loved it 🙂

  13. itsmeenakshi77 says:

    I would love to hear the larger version, It has piqued my interest.

  14. Kodjo Deynoo says:

    What more can I add to the brilliant comments already posted… but kudos

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