dreams, like bones, break hard
so I sleep with eyes open
awake, I can blink
A nice bit of Haiku. I can see you staring white-eyed and sleep-blind at the ceiling. At lot from a few words. Good.
Thanks! Glad you liked. Thought I’d try my hand at a darker haiku.
sleeping with open eyes…that’s so tough.. always alert because of fear what awaits us in our dreams.. i had bad dreams as a kid.. nowadays i dream seldom and sometimes really weird things…not scary though…more funny..smiles
Ah, I enjoy my dreams now. Could not resist this one though, after having a conversation about recurring nightmares from childhood with someone.
Ay yee yee. been there too much.
I am laughing at the image of you asleep with eyes open. Powerful haiku
Hee hee. Thanks!
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