that trails and stretches want to
after all !
that curve into each other almost
into the . sleep
You are so creative! Love it.
Thank you, David! This was a prompt to the wildly creative bunch I have stumbled over the past few weeks (and longer) on WP. I am hoping you will join us, eventually, when you have less irons in the fire.
I like this one, kind of quirky and off-beat. Amazing how inappropriate pauses and strange punctuation have a beauty to them all their own. You are now not only playing with language but with the marks that punctuate it. Have you ever met my friend J at http://ayaladn.com/? He writes very profoundly thoughtful poetry, and this reminds me of some of his stuff.
Wow, just checked him out briefly, and he is incredibly singular in his expression–in a very, very good way. Thanks for the link!
Also glad you enjoyed this. I wanted to draw with punctuation marks.
I love creative uses of punctuation. I just read a book by Tom Conrad called “The Semicolon Bitch Had to Die” – the punctuation was a key element in the entire book. Great job 🙂 Loved this.
Oh, I have to get my hands on that book! Glad you enjoyed this one.
Oh, clever, Ms Daniels ~ I like.
Thank you, Polly!
This is so cleverly done
Thank you It was fun.
Oh this is wonderful Susan!!!!
Nice exploration… fun!
Thanks Who knew one could get naughty with punctuation?
why do uncurable freudians persist in seeing things in simple shapes and innocent forms?
Punctuations speak and sing.
They hum breaks, pauses and stops.
Shapes float and dance and whisper meanings….
and in their shy whispers and gentle murmurs,
spoons are no longer just for the table,
even if they still collocate with meals and eating
in these new fresh environments
all descriptive and so so suggestive
Love this response! I had to play… Oh, wait, what do those ellipses MEAN now? And what about question marks? What messages am I sending, coded in punctuation–or am I just punctuating?
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