it echoes–
this pause before words
weighted breath

About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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14 Responses to silence

  1. Trent Lewin says:

    That is a cool self-aware haiku, Susan.

  2. It speaks loud
    the empty spaces
    between words

  3. nelle says:

    Gasps for air.

  4. Green Speck says:

    It feels heavy !!!

  5. Powerful echo, Susan.

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