this pause before words
That is a cool self-aware haiku, Susan.
It speaks loud
the empty spaces
minds falter before
for so long now free
I replied with my 3-5-3 on your blog…I should have waited to see your addition first…
Gasps for air.
🙂 I am taking Noel’s reply haiku out of here and making it a chain… This was fun!
It sure does!
Yes. Interesting now no sound can echo…
It feels heavy !!!
Yes! My duet partner adds still more depth!
Powerful echo, Susan.
Thanks much, C.
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