it echoes–
this pause before words
weighted breath
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Susan Daniels Poetry 
That is a cool self-aware haiku, Susan.
Thanks, Trent!
It speaks loud
the empty spaces
between words
oh!
those moments
minds falter before
sharing truth
truth haltered
for so long now free
freeing tears
I replied with my 3-5-3 on your blog…I should have waited to see your addition first…
Gasps for air.
🙂 I am taking Noel’s reply haiku out of here and making it a chain… This was fun!
It sure does!
Yes. Interesting now no sound can echo…
It feels heavy !!!
Yes! My duet partner adds still more depth!
Powerful echo, Susan.
Thanks much, C.