reflections–octpowrimo day 14

the beauty we know
this dance
of light
and matter

their rainbow game
you to me
in diffuse
spectral reflection

spinning colors
you are not
to dazzle eyes inside
snapped angles
in all directions

unneeded sun
you give back

and grateful
i bask in it


Double reflection: The sun is reflected in the water, which is reflected in the paddle.
Image courtesy of Wikipedia.


About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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8 Responses to reflections–octpowrimo day 14

  1. jmgoyder says:

    The whole poem is wonderful but the ‘you are not’ really got to me (in a good way)

  2. Green Speck says:

    Basking in the glory of sun … loved it !!!

  3. nelle says:

    Unneeded sun… like.

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