in case the world goes pop (for a new friend)

Posted on October 7, 2012 by Susan L Daniels

ask me again
what i think of you
in a year

i said

forgetting the mayan calendar
and its end in two months
or thereabouts

in the instance
that the world explodes
like a cherry bomb

while the ash and dust
that was us unfurl
into vacuum,
in more of a snap
than anything
as big as a bang

remind one of your particles
to ask one of mine
as we race further
into unbecoming

and i’ll answer

About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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10 Responses to in case the world goes pop (for a new friend)

  1. Green Speck says:
    October 7, 2012 at 11:45 am

    That’s a nice time to answer 😛

  2. Rhonda says:
    October 7, 2012 at 11:56 am

    can you ask one of your other ones to look for one of mine too? promise me.

  3. nelle says:
    October 7, 2012 at 1:04 pm

    Hope the universe uses my constituent parts well.

  4. unfetteredbs says:
    October 7, 2012 at 1:08 pm

    I need to come up with new comments but for now.. greatness Susan. I love this and its message. A great ponderance

  5. The Enfant Terrible says:
    October 7, 2012 at 1:30 pm

    This actually made me giggle. I’m weird, I know. I really enjoyed the references to particles and space etc. I’m a huge geek on the quiet when it comes to astronomy etc. CHERRY BOMBS! Fabulous, as ALWAYS!

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