haiku heights: waltz

Posted on September 27, 2012 by Susan L Daniels

this dance of planets
is more reel than waltz, tumbling
orbits spun dizzy

About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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17 Responses to haiku heights: waltz

  1. dulcinaandgnome says:
    September 27, 2012 at 11:54 pm

    Powerful haiku, Susan, the planets moving, more reel than waltz, yes.
    🙂

  2. Bruce Ruston says:
    September 28, 2012 at 2:44 am

    Nice Idea Planets dancing around the sun’s pull

  3. Green Speck says:
    September 28, 2012 at 3:07 am

    This was unique … loved the waltz of the planets 🙂

  4. brudberg says:
    September 28, 2012 at 5:59 am

    Very nice, waltzing planets.

  5. readinpleasure says:
    September 28, 2012 at 8:19 am

    A powerful and unique take on the prompt, Susan.

  6. magicalmysticalteacher says:
    September 28, 2012 at 8:39 am

    Any kind of dance—reel or waltz—is good!

    Wilderness Waltz

  7. Susan L Daniels says:
    September 28, 2012 at 8:44 am

    Thank you guys so much!

  8. Barbara says:
    September 28, 2012 at 1:55 pm

    Strong! Love the final line…orbits spun dizzy..

  9. Karin Wiberg says:
    September 28, 2012 at 5:08 pm

    I love the contrast of reel and waltz–well done!

  10. elleceef says:
    September 28, 2012 at 6:30 pm

    I like the idea of the planets dancing a reel and “spun dizzy” – Enjoyed this very much.

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