this dance of planets
is more reel than waltz, tumbling
orbits spun dizzy
Powerful haiku, Susan, the planets moving, more reel than waltz, yes.
thanks, Dulcina! I needed to go solar system today.
Nice Idea Planets dancing around the sun’s pull
This was unique … loved the waltz of the planets 🙂
Very nice, waltzing planets.
A powerful and unique take on the prompt, Susan.
Any kind of dance—reel or waltz—is good!
Thank you guys so much!
Strong! Love the final line…orbits spun dizzy..
I love the contrast of reel and waltz–well done!
I like the idea of the planets dancing a reel and “spun dizzy” – Enjoyed this very much.
Thanks, Nelle. All I could see in my mind was an animation of all those crazy orbits 😉
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