haiku heights: waltz

this dance of planets
is more reel than waltz, tumbling
orbits spun dizzy

About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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17 Responses to haiku heights: waltz

  1. dulcinaandgnome says:

    Powerful haiku, Susan, the planets moving, more reel than waltz, yes.

  2. Bruce Ruston says:

    Nice Idea Planets dancing around the sun’s pull

  3. Green Speck says:

    This was unique … loved the waltz of the planets 🙂

  4. brudberg says:

    Very nice, waltzing planets.

  5. A powerful and unique take on the prompt, Susan.

  6. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    Any kind of dance—reel or waltz—is good!

    Wilderness Waltz

  7. Thank you guys so much!

  8. Barbara says:

    Strong! Love the final line…orbits spun dizzy..

  9. Karin Wiberg says:

    I love the contrast of reel and waltz–well done!

  10. elleceef says:

    I like the idea of the planets dancing a reel and “spun dizzy” – Enjoyed this very much.

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