I feel your words

I feel your words

shaking as the world did
when it was made

shaping mountains
and valleys
oceans cooling to a simmer

with then
the unexpected gentleness
of rain

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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25 Responses to I feel your words

  1. wonderful poem and even engaging more when read at a second level of meaning!

  2. johncoyote says:

    Strong words should shake the world. I like the purpose and meaning in the excellent poetry.

  3. Green Speck says:

    Ah … the soothing rain !!!

  4. Trent Lewin says:

    Beautiful poem, made me think instantly of Malick’s Tree of Life.

  5. nelle says:

    Such a setting you create, the sweet contrast, with rain a taming influence. I imagine relishing the moment of the first rain.

  6. chenayimoyo says:

    Yes! You kept your word! Wow ! Brilliant , just brilliant Madame Susan!

  7. LOVE His word and yours that reverberate with His!

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