September Heights: Autumn (3 haiku)

we say summer fades
after Labor Day, but
we still have 18 days

late summer sparks leaves
to shift yellow to orange
branches catching fire

autumn steps lightly
the brown leaves hiding my path
just a hint of fall

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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60 Responses to September Heights: Autumn (3 haiku)

  1. These are lovely Susan ~ they sit so well together

  2. boomiebol says:

    Way to go with your Haiku self…well done! Doing this along with you guys but in my notes.

  3. Bruce Ruston says:

    Very nice Susan liking them lots

  4. Ramesh Sood says:

    These are so very beautiful…each spilling some autumn…liked them all..

    Well, I am here with a story… http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2012/09/autumn-sheds-inhibitions.html

  5. Barbara says:

    Love the image of the branches catching fire!

  6. Kathy Donlan says:

    Very nice, love that you linked the leaves catching fire with summer and the image of Autumn stepping lightly

  7. Green Speck says:

    “Branches catching fire” amazing writing !!!

  8. Pranita says:

    Very nice Susan… Thanks for sharing! 🙂

  9. basho2012 says:

    Beautifully composed. Love the autumn images you paint with your words.

  10. poetrydiary says:

    Lovely light touch to the last one here – it feels as fine as a dried autumn leaf.

  11. Grace says:

    Lovely set, specially the last one..hint of fall ~

  12. elleceef says:

    Love your autumn images – “branches catching fire” is a favourite line

  13. unfetteredbs says:

    branches catching fire.. love the images here. And you did THREE … fabulous Susan. I love fall too

  14. nelle says:

    It lurks near. Such a change, and heavy rain comes tonight.

  15. A Walk In My Heart says:

    A great time for reflection! Lovely to read you, Susan.

  16. Susan says:

    sparks and fire, and just a hint of fall
    very true, let’s linger in the beauty and not rush things along

  17. odyzz says:

    Aww !! beautiful imagery..loved all of them…

    Many thanks for stopping by my blog and sharing your thoughts..keep doing it

  18. Paperheart says:

    Nicely done, I likey =)

  19. you describe it so well!

  20. I love the image of branches catching fire, Susan. So vividly colourful. Well done

  21. Leo says:

    Just a hint is fine 🙂 It holds a lot of beauty.

  22. Wow!!…What a beautiful description of Autumn!….just lovely!

  23. Patti says:

    “branches catching fire” – that is such a pretty and powerful fall image. Here in New England, the red maples and a bush called “burning bush” look exactly like that, as if they’d burst into flames over night.

  24. What can I say… thank god I came here today.. should I say anything more?
    http://chaigaramchai.blogspot.in/2012/09/autumn-haiku.html

  25. This prompt has certainly inspired you! Thanks for this flash if brilliance

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