Haiku Heights September haiku a day challenge kickoff–drawbridge

the castles I make
have sand drawbridges, and moats
no deeper than hands

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42 Responses to Haiku Heights September haiku a day challenge kickoff–drawbridge

  1. Paperheart says:

    Sand castles & drawbridges,wonderful!

  2. Green Speck says:

    Hmmm …. imaginative !!!

  3. Kathy Donlan says:

    I new there was a haiku about sandcastles around this prompt, but for the life of me I couldn’t come up with it. Glad you did . . . well done!

  4. Seb says:

    Haikus are hard! Well done πŸ™‚

  5. doncarroll says:

    that was cool:))

  6. elleceef says:

    Very nice,,,I can picture them – the sandcastles with their drawbridges,,,,very nice haiku.

  7. Wonderfully crafted haiku.

  8. Susan says:

    Mine always had drawbridges! Hands as a measure is perfect–and even made me think of the horses that cross the bridges. Perfect.

  9. poetrydiary says:

    A beautifully simple haiku. The best I have read today! I like the hands at the end, linking back to making – it is very well crafted.

  10. Ramesh Sood says:

    I like the way you showed the depth of moats.. you must have seen that moats in my haiku can’t be measured with depth.. I loved your haiku so much..

  11. Pranita says:

    Ur haiku emanates warmth! Lovely.. πŸ™‚
    Creepy thorns to glistening petals

  12. Ian Moone says:

    Oh you and the other guys are setting the standard high I see mine is in my usual style

  13. this was such a challenging prompt… but your effort here with this one looks effortless as it came beautifully… in short this is dreamlike…


  14. Sand castles and drawbridges.. Wow.. Great one..!

  15. Barbara says:

    Very very nice images! Love the last line.

  16. I’ve seen moats in England, and not one of them was/is as shallow as the length of a hand. Oh, how you startled—and delighted—me with your image!


  17. Patti says:

    There is a playfulness to this that I really like.

  18. nelle says:

    And no gators!

  19. becca givens says:

    Reminds me of times at the beach watching people sculpt wonders with their hands in the sand. πŸ˜€ DrawBridge

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