sky music

i heard hymns
sung in thunder
today

the deep bass drum
of the sky
torn open

to bleed rain

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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23 Responses to sky music

  1. ~Lady Day says:

    Love those stormy nights.

  2. boomiebol says:

    Ow!!! Me loves this much…the imagery created.

  3. davidtrudel says:

    There’s a symphony around us if we stop to listen. Glad you do Susan!

  4. unfetteredbs says:

    so few words and yet I love it… love the summer rain

  5. doncarroll says:

    superb susan in all its rhythm:))

  6. Seb says:

    al’ue’cha!

  7. Such symbolism Susan ~ wonderful

  8. You could have prolonged the music experience in the last line with something like – whisper of rain. But that’s my take, ofcourse. 🙂

  9. Wow! Such powerful imagery. Simply beautiful

  10. 76 trom=bones! Wonderful !

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