if gravity
moves us closer
to the solid core
the desire of matter
earth holds for us
a stone hunger
lightly expressed
so as to keep
what is loved
unbroken
then, perhaps
this overwhelming pull
towards you
can be expressed
but controlled
in equally quiet strength
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Can’t wait to see you visit with centrifugal force. 🙂
LOL–might have to change the rating on my blog for that one!
love the quiet yet powerful pull that you have softly created
Thanks, Audra.
subtly intense!
🙂 thanks. Hmmm–I have rarely been called subtle 🙂
strong, powerful!
Thank you–I am back to physical forces here 🙂
a stone hunger…to keep what is loved unbroken… love this
Claudia, thanks so much. I am reading a book now (“Becoming Animal” by Abrams) that touched on the subject of gravity being earth’s yearning for us; a thought/image that got this one roiling.
Like gravity, this poem is a pervasive force.
Seb, thank you. Tried to catch that “gentle yearning.”
nice…i really like this….makes me thing og gravity by john mayer a bit….and if only love could stay unbroken….
Thank you, Brian–if only…perhaps we need to treat it with more gentleness.
beautiful food for the brain
Thanks so much–glad you enjoyed.
Powerful and yet with an understated sensuality of its own. Just beautiful!
Thanks so much, Celestine. Was trying for a gentle simmer 🙂