the movement married to this water
is reflective and gentle
ripples laughing peace
soft currents that tease bare feet
sun to dance
Reminds of summers spent at the beach with the family. Wonderful poem. 🙂
Thanks Rigel 🙂
I think this is one of my favs…which is hard to say, because every time I read one of your posts, I say to myself “I think this one is my fav”…
Aww, Mimi, you are so awesome!
Hardly – just struggling with the limits of my vocabulary to be able to effectively articulate how much I delight in your poetry..:-)
Oh my, please stop there, or I will just float up to the clouds, so full of air 🙂
Thanks… I lack the vocab to express my humble gratitude appropriately.
Oh, go float for a little while – you deserve it! 🙂
Lovely portrayal of the flow of water currents !!! Beautiful !!!
Thank you–my creek always gives me something new 🙂
This one brings the photos you posted a few months back on your facebook page to life! beautiful as it captures the song of the sun on slowly flowing singing waters!
Yes. Nice to have water in it again.
Glad you have that creek. I think it has a special place that keeps and holds your happy so you always know where to find it. 🙂 Beautiful sfam
Awww–Rhonda, that is so true :).
ripples laughing peace…you make me want to dip my toes in with the wonderful piece(peace)
Audra–LOVE the comment.
Thank you–again, it is so nice to have a little water in that creek again 🙂 Missed it!
Monet in words! Thank you always ~ xo
Thanking you right back, Deb!
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