the right depth of water

Posted on July 29, 2012 by Susan L Daniels

the movement married to this water
is reflective and gentle
ripples laughing peace

soft currents that tease bare feet
to wade
& persuade
sun to dance

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About Susan L Daniels

I am a firm believer that politics are personal, that faith is expressed through action, and that life is something that must be loved and lived authentically--or why bother with any of it?
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19 Responses to the right depth of water

  1. Judd Labarda's avatar Rigel Ordinario says:
    July 29, 2012 at 6:58 pm

    Reminds of summers spent at the beach with the family. Wonderful poem. 🙂

  2. mimijk's avatar mimijk says:
    July 29, 2012 at 7:29 pm

    I think this is one of my favs…which is hard to say, because every time I read one of your posts, I say to myself “I think this one is my fav”…

  3. Green Speck's avatar Green Speck says:
    July 29, 2012 at 8:11 pm

    Lovely portrayal of the flow of water currents !!! Beautiful !!!

  4. Noel Ihebuzor's avatar Noel Ihebuzor says:
    July 29, 2012 at 8:33 pm

    This one brings the photos you posted a few months back on your facebook page to life! beautiful as it captures the song of the sun on slowly flowing singing waters!

  5. Rhonda's avatar Rhonda says:
    July 30, 2012 at 12:59 am

    Glad you have that creek. I think it has a special place that keeps and holds your happy so you always know where to find it. 🙂 Beautiful sfam

  6. unfetteredbs's avatar unfetteredbs says:
    July 30, 2012 at 1:03 am

    ripples laughing peace…you make me want to dip my toes in with the wonderful piece(peace)

  8. I HAVE A VOICE's avatar I HAVE A VOICE says:
    July 31, 2012 at 9:18 pm

    Monet in words! Thank you always ~ xo

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